Chapter 5 – pg 14 of 22

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  1. Eversist says:
    December 10, 2009 at 12:14 am

    Nice touch with the cig out of frame. :)

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  2. foxmouse says:
    December 10, 2009 at 5:10 am

    Pffft. If someone sprung that shit on me I’d say, “No, I’m gonna pay for my half, you mooching heifer.” Of course, I’d say that after I left, like the following day. That’s right, I’d leave them at the diner with their half of the bill.

    What? I’m not made of money. Also helps that I’m a bitch.

    Great page, by the way.

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  3. Stephanie says:
    December 10, 2009 at 8:51 am

    Ahhh it’s so agonizing to wait for the new pages every week, but so great when the day comes. I love a story that makes me feel that way. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

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  4. M says:
    December 11, 2009 at 9:01 am

    Hahaha, that is some Ben Folds Five shit right there. :D So are you updating on Wednesdays now, or am I just getting *that* behind in my week?

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    • Ethan Young says:
      December 11, 2009 at 9:04 am

      Ha, there are certain summers I wouldn’t have been able to survive without the help of booze and Ben Folds Five. As for the updates, I occasionally post on Wednesdays if the scene is longer than 2 pages. So no, you’re not behind =)

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      • jethomas says:
        December 12, 2009 at 11:24 am

        “Ha, there are certain summers I wouldn’t have been able to survive with the help of booze and Ben Folds Five.”

        Well, I’m glad you survived without them.

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      • Ethan Young says:
        December 12, 2009 at 2:26 pm

        Oops, I meant ‘without’. But hey, I probably coulda lived without them anyway.

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  5. Chloe Bowie says:
    December 12, 2009 at 7:10 am

    I agree, loving the flicked cig out of frame =)

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